Finalising the Writing and Improvements
I have finalised my writing so that it could be published into Canva. First, I have increased the content in Chapter Two, so that the story of the chapter would look completed. Instead of just describing the scene of the bombing process that worked out by a B-52D, I decided to add the interaction between the Spirit of Minot and the B-52D that flew on that mission, in order to explain more on the details of the deadly mission during war. Then, I changed the description for the plot when Minot bombed the energy's airport, so that when the audience read this part they can experience from the perspective of Minot. Also, in the draft I mentioned that this bombing mission was Minot's "another mission" after returning from the first one, but I decided to change it to become her "final" mission, so that it can foreshadow her first "retirement" from the active fleet, which will be the story for the last chapter of the book. For the last chapter, I did not...